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Poetry On The RoadIn our fast paced society, people set aside less and less time for both reading and writing. Visit an internet bulletin board, and you will see phrases like 'ne way', 'lol', 'imho', which mean 'anyway', 'laugh out loud', and 'in my humble opinion', respectively. In a world where every keystroke is a waste of time, it is no wonder that students don't think they have time for descriptive writing and poetry.
Even worse, the ability to use proper grammar and spelling is disintegrating. Asking a student who can't use proper grammar to write poetry or descriptive prose is like asking a violinist to play the Mendelssohn concerto, when he can't even play scales.
Before asking students to write poetry which fits certain meter or rhyme schemes, such as Haiku, sonnets, or even limericks, it is important to help students appreciate the beauty that is possible within the English language.
After watching 'The Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Rings', the movie based on J. R. R. Tolkien's fantasy trilogy, I decided it was high time to read the books. As a product of our society-on-the-run, I found the writing more descriptive than I prefer, with a great deal of emphasis on setting and mood. However, there is no denying the genius of such descriptive writing as the following:
Even to the Mere of Dead Faces some haggard phantom of green spring could come; but here neither spring nor summer would ever come again. Here nothing lived, not even the leprous growths that feed on rottenness. The gasping pools were choked with ash and crawling muds, sickly white and grey, as if the mountains had vomited the filth of their entrails upon the lands about. High mounds of crushed and powdered rock, great cones of earth fire-blasted and poison-stained, stood like an obscene graveyard in endless rows, slowly revealed by the reluctant light.
--from 'The Two Towers' by J. R. R. Tolkien To return to the violinist analogy, if we can get students to write descriptive phrases, that is like one of the 'scales' in preparation for the 'concerto' that is creative writing and poetry.
So how do we encourage students to write and think descriptively? One way is to ask students to take a notebook with them when they go on long trips. Since there is often nothing else to do, ask students to watch everything that passes by on the road. Look closely, and ask the following questions about the things they see: - Can I compare this object to something else? (simile)
- Can I give this object 'human' qualities? (personification)
- Can I describe this object as though it were something else? (metaphor)
- Can I give a description that create a feeling of happiness, foreboding, or some other emotion? (mood)
Students should write down the phrases they think of. They don't have to fit any form of meter or rhyme, nor do they have to flow together, or even be complete sentences.
The following are samples of my own, from a recent trip along the somewhat deserted stretch of interstate 95 from Bangor to Houlton, Maine. Some of these were daytime descriptions; others were at night, during the return trip. - Snow streaks across my vision like headlights in a time-lapsed photograph
- Trees: Bereft of their foliage, naked yet defiant against the attacks of January
- Solitary signposts, like lonely sentinels guarding the gates to such exotic locations as T2-R9 and Millinocket
- The sleeping moon, tipped back on its sphere, drifting lazily among wispy pillows
- Evergreen branches, heavy laden and bowed down with snow, like a long-armed primate with its knuckles dragging across the ground
- Forests, rising darkly into the nightscape, storing up shadows for a sunny day
- Trees bowing inward, giving homage to the technological marvel of a highway in the wilderness
If you want more ideas to share with your students, a great resource is the 'Toward More Picturesque Speech' feature in the 'Reader's Digest'. This feature does a great job of collecting creative, descriptive phrases.
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mgscmwa says:
I thought this was a wonderful article. The idea of students taking notebooks on trips was great. It is a great way for students to remember their trip experiences and to provide them with good story starter ideas.
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